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AUTHORS - Peter Clayfield

TERRA INCOGNITA: NOVEL

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Synopsis

Dateline: 1968
Location: Northern USA


Damon Carter-Brown is an English scientist employed by an American scientific foundation. He is working on the development of a time travel machine. An associate, Tibor Varkas, has been jailed for misappropriation of Foundation funds. This man, a dangerous psychopath, kills a prison guard and escapes. His intention is to gain revenge on Damon who reported his crime.

Varkas makes his way back to the Foundation. Damon is away in Washington having discussions on funding. The escapee gains entry and rapes and murders Damon's wife, Valentina. He then enters the lab area intent on arson. He discovers from records that the project is nearing completion and that rats have been transferred (one way). Taking a chance on the not fully tested machine, he activates the equipment with a view to projecting himself forward to the year 2050.

Damon and Valentina's brother, Quintino, discover that Varkas has used the machine and decide to follow. They emerge into a world devastated by nuclear war. Society has degenerated towards the primitive. Ruined cities are either abandoned or fought over by gangs. Electricity supplies are beginning to be reconnected via a network of Power Towers (windmills). These towers are under the control of a Chief Electrician.

They befriend the people of a small generating village and learn that Varkas had been there and murdered a Houri (prostitute) before fleeing. D&Q are stunned to learn that this took place more than 12 months before their arrival.

The trail is now cold. D&Q need to acquire money in order to give chase. In a bar, they meet Robin C Throbbin, a roving balladeer with a penchant for Shakespeare. He plays a few sad songs and is rewarded with payment from the clientele. Quintino - an ex rock band member - borrows Robin's acoustic guitar and launches into a rock medley. He brings the house down - and, because the audience had never heard anything like it, he collects a fair amount of cash.

Quintino suggests that they now have the perfect way to get cash to fund the chase - he and Robin will re-introduce Rock. To do this properly they need electric guitars and a sound amplifier system. Apparently such items no longer exist. They decide to journey to a nearby ruined city, Old Salty (Salt Lake City) to scavenge for parts.

There, they are captured by a gang of Rastafarians (The Buffalo Soldiers) who worship Bob Marley as Mighty Jah. Quintino stuns their capturers by singing Marley numbers to the accompaniment of an old acoustic guitar. This feat allows them a limited freedom. They discover one of the Soldier's children playing with an electric guitar. This is considered to be a toy due to its lack of sound re-production. The boy directs them to where he found the instrument. They discover more electric guitars - and a sound system. When they try to escape with these items, they are re-captured and used as bait in a trap for mutated rats (a delicacy to the Soldiers). They survive and make good their escape.

Before they can get back to the Power Towers they are overtaken by a black land yacht, powered by silver solar sails. This yacht is crewed by Sunsail Pirates, under the leadership of Bane, a vicious killer. D&Q trick the pirates and steal their craft.

Back at the Power Towers they polish up their act and give a couple of performances. These net enough cash to get the quest underway. Accompanied by Robin and Liana (the Houri sister of the murdered prostitute) they set off on the journey to New Denver.

After escaping from a trap sprung by a gang of mutants (the leader of whom demands sex with Liana - and dies in the process) they pass by the ruins of Denver and reach New Denver.

The inhabitants of the emerging city are ruled by a black Chief Electrician (Obeah) who is rumoured to be the son of an African magician. The newcomers' impact upon the populace brings them into conflict with the Chief Electrician.

Running concurrent with D&Q's story, are Varkas’ own experiences in the shattered world. He 'arrived' expecting fame and is devastated by actuality. After murdering an old prospector and a prostitute he discovers that his original destination, Denver, is a wasteland. On the advice of a power employee he decides to make for Santa Fe, which escaped total ruin. The power employee is killed by Sunsail Pirates (the same crew from whom D&Q later steal the yacht). Varkas takes the murdered man's horse and cart and sets out on his own journey – which will eventually bring him to God.

The story also chronicles the rise of Bane, the Sunsail Pirate. After taking over the leadership of the Pirates, he forms an alliance with other city gangs to produce and market a narcotic weed, which grows near their own ruined city. He travels to New Denver on a test sales run and meets up again with Damon.

Damon becomes increasingly divorced from Quintino and Robin's musical renaissance. They are only interested in fame and fortune. He wants revenge. He forms an alliance with Bane, who he convinces to market the weed in Santa Fe (Damon has deduced that this is where Varkas is likely to have headed).

Beneath the surface theme there is another. The transfer through time has instigated subtle, but snowballing changes in personal character. Cool, calm, law abiding Damon becomes progressively more aggressive and violent. Originally his motive in following Varkas was to bring the killer to justice; soon he is being destroyed by the desire for retribution. Happy go lucky Quintino begins to be drawn to power via the creation of a new musical empire. Varkas, the cold psychopathic killer/rapist, suffers increasingly from remorse, until finally, after undergoing voluntary physical emasculation, he is able to dedicate himself to the 'bringing of holy light'.

Although the story does contain an initial SF theme, it is primarily concerned with human emotions and the forces that drive and shape the nature of men.


© Peter Clayfield, September 2005

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